1. When the book says....
Some girl asked me last week if i was running a dead animal farm.I felt my face turn all red,but deep inside I was kind of happy about that remark. she was the first person at Rothborne to take my meaning .Well, sort of . I like animals and all, but I'm not obsessed with animals.
I Would....
Make a crowd appear.
Because....
They could hear he like animals even though he isn't obesessed with them.
2. When the book says....
But that's a hard arguemennt to hold on to when your looking at people whose average age is fifteen, and when we're still living under a 10:00 p.m. curfewin the dorm.
I Would....
Make a picture of the dorm appear.
Because....
You can see a better understanding of why they have 10:00 p.m. curfew.
3. When the bok says....
I could spot guys from the dorm as i walked into the dining hall, and i could pull up a seat next to them and goof around.
I Would....
Make when he was goofin around stay in that paragraph.
Because....
All he wanted to do is make some friend.
April 30, 2009
Chapter 5-9( Pages 56-107)
1. When the book says...
My hand went to my sweater pocket, and I felt a piece of paper folded in there. The note from Creed. We had decided we were going to show it to Leandra and Renee.
I Would...
I would not have showed anyone that Creed is still living.
Becaue...
If he only writes me, that means he must want me to keep it a secrete. Unless he says he wants me to show everyone.
2. When the book says...
"I know that people wished I were dead, and at this moment in time I see no alternatives but to accomodate them in the wish."
I Would...
Take this letter or note to the policeman.
Because...
Christopher Creed is saying that he will accomadate people wishes. Meaning that he will grant their wishes. So he says he might commit a suicude.
May 8, 2009
1. When the book says...
"My mom was totally blankas those cops took me away in the cop car."
I would....
Instead of his mother just standing there, i would make her react to him being taken away becasue it shows that she didnt care.
2. When the book says..
"
May 21, 20009
1.when the book says
" I sat in the polic station with my mom on the side of me and ail on the other i remember being glad that my dad had been at working that night".
I would...
I would have been glad that his dad was working that night because he would have been in there for a while but his mom was there to get him.
Chapter 1( Pages 1-16)
1. When the book says....
Some girl asked me last week if i was running a dead animal farm.I felt my face turn all red,but deep inside I was kind of happy about that remark. she was the first person at Rothborne to take my meaning .Well, sort of . I like animals and all, but I'm not obsessed with animals.
I Would....
Make a crowd appear.
Because....
They could hear he like animals even though he isn't obesessed with them.
2. When the book says....
But that's a hard arguemennt to hold on to when your looking at people whose average age is fifteen, and when we're still living under a 10:00 p.m. curfewin the dorm.
I Would....
Make a picture of the dorm appear.
Because....
You can see a better understanding of why they have 10:00 p.m. curfew.
3. When the bok says....
I could spot guys from the dorm as i walked into the dining hall, and i could pull up a seat next to them and goof around.
I Would....
Make when he was goofin around stay in that paragraph.
Because....
All he wanted to do is make some friend.
April 30, 2009
Chapter 5-9( Pages 56-107)
1. When the book says...
My hand went to my sweater pocket, and I felt a piece of paper folded in there. The note from Creed. We had decided we were going to show it to Leandra and Renee.
I Would...
I would not have showed anyone that Creed is still living.
Becaue...
If he only writes me, that means he must want me to keep it a secrete. Unless he says he wants me to show everyone.
2. When the book says...
"I know that people wished I were dead, and at this moment in time I see no alternatives but to accomodate them in the wish."
I Would...
Take this letter or note to the policeman.
Because...
Christopher Creed is saying that he will accomadate people wishes. Meaning that he will grant their wishes. So he says he might commit a suicude.
May 8, 2009
1. When the book says...
"My mom was totally blankas those cops took me away in the cop car."
I would....
Instead of his mother just standing there, i would make her react to him being taken away becasue it shows that she didnt care.
2. When the book says..
"
May 21, 20009
1.when the book says
" I sat in the polic station with my mom on the side of me and ail on the other i remember being glad that my dad had been at working that night".
I would...
I would have been glad that his dad was working that night because he would have been in there for a while but his mom was there to get him.
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